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Hold on, Hold on by ~stompy101:iconstompy101:



Hold on, Hold on
Even when things seem
So wrong, So wrong
We will never....


I don't know where to turn,
everything is a blur,
and as I watch it all burn,
all I can see is her.
Can I get out of this place,
with dignity, with grace,
and be lost without a trace,
so it can be erased.


Hold on, Hold on
Even when things seem
So wrong, So wrong,
And we will never be
Undone, Undone,
Until it is
All gone, All gone.


The Villein had fled
leaving a Hero instead,
And the charges the bailiff read
Named the Hero to be dead.
And the Hero looked out,
into the crowd, he found his love, no doubt,
and he had the courage to shout,
A prayer for her out loud.

He yelled...

Hold on! Hold on!
Even when things seem,
So wrong! So wrong!
And we will never be left,
Undone! Undone!
Not until they are,
All gone! All gone!

The lovers spirit lost feeling,
watching him die, her legs were not willing,
to hold her, so her body went careening,
down to the ground, where she now lays weeping.

She cried...

Hold...on. Hold...on.
How can I when things are
So...wrong. So...wrong.
And I have been
Undone....Undone...
Because you are now
Long...gone.....long gone....
gone....
©2009 ~stompy101
:iconstompy101:

Author's Comments

I had a beat stuck in my head and I wrote this during summer school today, it might seem a bit confusing. Fav, comment, tell me what you think of it, thanks ^^

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Wow, i really like this, kind of relatable. And...
"The Villein had fled" Typo.. villain not with an "e" XDD Good job, i really liked this. ^^

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"Same old eyes, same old world but the difference is how you look at what is in front of you, not what it is." ~Lister Sinclair
:iconstompy101:
Sorry about that, I'm no good at spelling so that's the reason for the typo. Thank you very much ^^

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Never fight for yourself, always fight for someone else.

Pain is a double edged sword, you will be bloody and you will start to die, but your resolve to live gets much stronger.

Does this deafening silence mean nothing, to no one, but me?
:iconidreaminglasscolor:
Haha, you're very welcome! ^^

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"Same old eyes, same old world but the difference is how you look at what is in front of you, not what it is." ~Lister Sinclair
:iconstompy101:
Please check out my other works of Literature in my gallery, whatever little pieces you can find among the massive amounts of pictures XD

--
Never fight for yourself, always fight for someone else.

Pain is a double edged sword, you will be bloody and you will start to die, but your resolve to live gets much stronger.

Does this deafening silence mean nothing, to no one, but me?
:iconidreaminglasscolor:
Mhm, i will! Same goes for you, if you're extremely bored sometime, you should check out my work! ^^

--
"Same old eyes, same old world but the difference is how you look at what is in front of you, not what it is." ~Lister Sinclair
:iconstompy101:
Hahaha already one step ahead of you on that one ^^

--
Never fight for yourself, always fight for someone else.

Pain is a double edged sword, you will be bloody and you will start to die, but your resolve to live gets much stronger.

Does this deafening silence mean nothing, to no one, but me?
:iconidreaminglasscolor:
Ohhhh ^^

--
"Same old eyes, same old world but the difference is how you look at what is in front of you, not what it is." ~Lister Sinclair

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